Deep Dark Paleness Poem by Liz Bitelove

Deep Dark Paleness



Deep dark pale pain that screams within me. It screams for time has no gain.
The pain so real that I can't feel.
The only love once that was mine and now I come to find that you are no
longer in sight nor will you were willing to fight.
Although, I fought with my last breath to find my
love suffering at his last death. He made a promise as I had did.
And now he is at peace because the God who loved him more took him from me
and now our God has won.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Crimson Love 09 November 2011

Death is only a part of life, love shall overcome such meager attempts at seperation. truly a beautiful poem.

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Dave Walker 06 November 2011

Really liked reading this, a great poem. May i invite you to read my poem called, lilly.

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Very sad and touching, its always sad to loose the ones we love, but having to loose them to the mighty death lives a deep dark pain. nice one

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Very sad and touching, its always sad to loose the ones we love, but having to loose them to the mighty death lives a deep dark pain. nice one

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