Deja Vu Poem by minaslune serene

Deja Vu

Rating: 5.0


i saw the smile in your face when i came to the airport
it's really you... you are exist... you are my best friend
we walked through the city from morning till night time
saw the marbles scenery of your home town buildings
creatures and sculptures in the ancient time
we walked by foot to the peak of the hill
the hill which came into my dreams
and it comes into real like deja vu
piece by pieces comes into one puzzle
My Sun... my dream become reality
when we came into the peak of the hill
how did it happens which quite similar
like in my dreams... i have no idea at all
i just the person who wants my puzzle
becomes one and it was.. such as miracles
thank you to escort me for my dream
i will keep this precious moments in my heart always...
now i have to go home and meet my real life again
and continuing my life...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 22 March 2009

A poem to linger even in one's dream10

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

a beautiful narration of one's story in a poetic free verse form...painted with nice imagery...10+++

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Noor Fit Yani 25 October 2008

what a nice poem. i love it thank

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Very lovely, I'm glad I got to read this.

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