Diamonds In The Rough Poem by Adryan Barnathan

Diamonds In The Rough

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Into the caverns of space and time
we are the keepers of great stories
like priceless jewels
buried in dark layers of soil and stone
we are here to live and love
and assist others by creating
new visions to inspire

What kind of world we live in tomorrow
depends upon the stories we weave
today
We are the light that shines
to guide those who will live after us


Copyright ©2006

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sid John Gardner. 16 May 2006

We are the custodians not just of past success but bear the burden of mistakes from which we never learn.Why should we not be optimistic and encourage our contemporaries to continue and wear the mantel of our Best endeavours. You are singing my tune Adrienne. Respect - Sid John.

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Ulrike Gerbig 11 May 2006

i fully wholeheartedly agree! u.xxx

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Goldy Locks 11 May 2006

refreshing, A. & what stories we hold in the deep of our cores...refined into diamonds over the years..? i'd like to think.

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Adryan Barnathan 11 May 2006

Aisha. It is ironic that I just commented on your poem, ''The way you smell'' UR 2 counted in.

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Aisha Sherazi 11 May 2006

This is beautiful. I don't count myself as one of those you mention, but I am honoured to be among them! Peace, Aisha

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