i thought it was over
all gone and done
damn, its human nature
again, i've fallen in love
a small little girl
with her cute puppy eyes
with her smile, so sincere that brought me down
i, who was twice her height
is this actually love or affection
this case, how do i describe
these were feelings i never had before
they'll stay, but soon, she will go with time
im always so up and alive,
when im near her
that i was jumpy and warm, while she shivered,
in the chilly december
when my hands met with hers
it was a time, one of a kind
no, sparks didnt come and i didnt get zapped
but that was a time, i wsh would stay longer, or atleast again revived
is this actually love or affection
this case, how do i describe
these were feelings i never had before
they'll stay, but soon, she will go with time
i thank my age
but mourn about it too
cause it was that, that got me near her
but it keeps me away now, this short time was only how much God drew
all i know now is that
spending time with her, is what i love to have
but its too late, she's gone now, not dead & departed
but just home, to be with her mom and her dad
is this actually love or affection
this case, how do i describe
these are feelings i never had before
they stay, but damn, she's gone with time
Copyright © 2009 by Alen Alexander
Love at first sight, usually gone mad.Its the most critical part in human life.to be in love, for the very first time.Nice writes Alen.
awwwwwwwww! ! that was soooo beautiful! ! i absolutly loved it! ! fallin in love is a strong, powerful feeling...and the hardest thing to watch is for it all to slowly fade away...but like some say...it's better to have loved than lost...than to have never of loved at all...very good poem keep it up! ! ! ! :)
wow. nice poem. all of the words you chose was so perfect, because i felt the emotions that come through it.
Hi teenager, your feeling is very common in your age. You have expressed it properly and nicely Good work Rgds Nooruddeen
that was sweet...with an imagination of a inocent young teenager going into it... good job though u can be more careful with ur choice of words... keep writing...
Tamara Jay Hanaring said: hey Alen i read your poem..again it hapen and it just cheer me..it was sweet with vivid images and i say it will hasppen again and again..sweet lovely poem..
the story of every teenager your age.......the obvious feelings of love...u expressed it well......dont fret....love will come again....if not 2day..then 2morrow.... ur super amazing.....keep it up...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It keeps happening all the time, I suppose that's what they call experience (of the Love kind) . Nicely summarised by Grace. Well written. You have described the feelings well.