New Generation Poem by Alen Alexander

New Generation

Rating: 5.0


they say we've changed
changed to get better
from necessity
to luxury

but what exactly did we,
get better in?
the world has got so fake, that we're dependent
even on the smallest of things

our elders say 'in our days,
we used to plough our fields ourselves'
they look at us with pity, cramped in flats
after we come groaning after a 2 hour walk

sanitation and medication has got better
such that, we just get stuck
to the better medicine,
and give a better life to the pharmaceuticals

flus and poxes, that
haunted the world
have come back again,
to make a point

that we just get worse
when trying to make life easier
cause when we live easy,
we become as soft and dead as a marshmallow

not being able
to resist anything
and bring back
the ghosts of the world

then, when the kids were born with good health
just being vulnerable to the filth outside
but now kids are born with specs,
already weak, an easy prey for the epidemics

if we really were better, the ones who could to the extreme
we could call ourselves The Generation X
but rather now I guess,
we should be called The Generation Totally-Specs

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mona Martinez 14 September 2009

wow! ! i enjoyed that very much. it's very true. 'but what exactly did we, get better in? the world has got so fake, that we're dependent even on the smallest of things' loved this part very much because i can see where you are coming from. the thrid line is so powerful. i believe every part of it. thanks for sharing. :)

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Asma Khan 14 September 2009

Excellent and your poem is based on facts of life. You have nicely portrayed todays generation in beautiful words. 10/10

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Eyan Desir 14 September 2009

Good write sorry i didnt like your flow of words 10s

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Lady Grace 14 September 2009

that is progression dear..new generations are enjoying the high tech measures, , , and that is a part of development..

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Sneha 'The Poetess' 14 September 2009

this is wat people around the world think of our generation.. only we have the power to change their mindset... thanks a bunch for sharing ur thots.... :)

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Marieta Maglas 21 September 2009

It is an abstract poem very well written and the message is a warning sign for those who live without thinking that this world belongs primarily to children, the new generation.Thank you for sharing.10+++++

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DaNa XxX 15 September 2009

so true my friend..... your poem based on facts in life.. well done written Alen...thanks for sharing! ! ! ^__^ DaNa...

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Crazy Vampire 15 September 2009

good poem. it is true we have become lazy and dependent of many things. and the sad thing is that i dont think we will change.

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Obinna Eruchie 15 September 2009

It is true, as technology advanced, so many people in the world became obsessed with the idea of comfort, they want to do away with stress. A lot of people do not want to take exercise, to them it is stressful, in fact they want to live in a world where there is complete comfort. As they say 'too much everything is bad'.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 15 September 2009

yes, but we must be history makers that will change the way people look in our generation.

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