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Did You Ever.....

ever see a cherry tree blossom
ever watch the sunrise
ever savor that first sip of java
or for that matter enjoy a homemade pie?

ever think of when we first met
there is a beginning to all
remember the longing
of us together enjoying the fall?

things felt so natural
like nothing could go wrong
a love like ours
made of friendship was strong

ever walk the fresh fallen dew
ever see the first lily grow
ever feel the early morn sun
ever watch the first fallen snow?

remember when we first met
everything was new
the smiles and the laughter
everything was true

everything seems to last forever
at least until forever ends
but like forever
our love can begin again

Submitted: Friday, May 11, 2007
Edited: Friday, February 25, 2011


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  • Ed Nigma (1/16/2014 4:42:00 AM)

    Ever dance with the devil in the pale moonlight?

    That is the first thing I thought of when reading this. But that's besides the point this is a really sweet poem. it's a good memory and I like those memories. The last paragraph is the most powerful to me as it speaks the tone of the overall poem. Everything seems to last forever at least until forever ends but like forever our love can begin again. Life, death and rebirth. Cycles. Very nice poem!

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  • Khairul Ahsan (1/12/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    'things felt so natural
    like nothing could go wrong
    a love like ours
    made of friendship was strong' - These lines remind me of feelings of love and tenderness, as also the following:
    'remember when we first met
    everything was new
    the smiles and the laughter
    everything was true'

    Thanks for ending with this brilliant, optimistic note:
    'but like forever
    our love can begin again'. - Yes, it can.

  • Kosova Poems (2/1/2008 7:59:00 AM)

    Very good poem...thanks Somegirl

  • Chad Fisher (5/11/2007 11:41:00 PM)

    That is beautiful. If only my poetry was that nice, my ex might not have left me (LOL)

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