Treasure Island

Some Girl

(May 05)

Dreaming of You


Sitting alone
with nothing to do
my mind starts to dance
as i picture you.

you as a friend
then becoming my life
you are always there
adding sparks to my life

when i think of you
i know what my dreams hold
that they cannot be bought
with any ounce of gold

a trust i know
you'll never break
a love i know
you'll never fake

i ask you once ~
maybe twice
can you answer
and be my life?

Submitted: Tuesday, April 10, 2007
Edited: Saturday, August 17, 2013

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  • Khairul Ahsan (1/12/2014 4:04:00 AM)

    A nice poem that has come out as a result of dreaming. The feelings expressed here are all too known to whoever has ever been 'In Love'.
    A well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Paul R. Wilson (8/23/2013 3:52:00 PM)

    It reminds me of the past... oh good times! Anyway, you've done some good stuff and this'ne has got me wanting to read the rest. I wish I was as comfortable with sharing my work as you. (Report) Reply

  • without a name Face (9/1/2011 5:36:00 PM)

    yes, I often have this feeling.... daydreaming about it..... thinking about them..... but you portray it well.

    Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • without a name Face (9/1/2011 5:36:00 PM)

    yes, I often have this feeling.... daydreaming about it..... thinking about them..... but you portray it well.

    Keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Chad Fisher (6/30/2007 10:56:00 AM)

    Such an inspirational tone. This is so far my favorite poem of your collection. (Report) Reply

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