Didi! Poem by Shahzia Batool

And what for whom? who call u ma'm..hahah...lovely poem & nice dedication....am i wrong if i show my parched tongue..awesome line

the one who know the one who show the one whose soul the one who make us whole the one i wish to be the one is Shahzia didi.............. thank you so much...i am speechless

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A lovely poem Shahzia - I didn't know you had this pseudonym.

in the last 3 lines if you omit heart heart heart,3 times, yet the meaning is clear and understood,2nd line is very weak..hower 2nd stanza is the heart of the poem and where from the poem stands out and out.....a lovely poem, have i gone very critical? yet i love this poem.....give you 10...

A beautiful write didi....... An affectionate and humble write indeed....... A child heart, a mild heart, cute rhyming... Its always good to be a child at heart, give, crave for love in return (although not advisable) , forget the past, cherish the present and greet everyone with a smile........ May this write of your fill joy in hearts forever! .... ~Y.S.

Remember always, follow your heart, what is in it, what is a wish, follow through, because there lies lessons for you, let them be good or bad, but just open for what is there. I went through many of these feelings and I know I sure got my lessons, why I bless everybody in my life because they made me what I am today. When you get it, the whole world will be your best friend.

A kind of khidmat the best way to worship to please to provide happiness Glory to be Allah keep on carrying up to unending end

nice one didi.affection of brother n sister is purely divine n can b compared with mother only. i too have posted one poem with the same title. affection n love for u didi.

So beautifully written. Living in present is the best policy without worrying what happened and what will happen. You do have a child's heart: alive, wild and pure.