Shahzia Batool

Rookie - 568 Points (Pakistan)

Didi!


I live moment by moment
no saving, planning, scheming for future
my present is my treasure
my present is my life
what is there behind my words
is simple, tender, gentle heart
i'm thirsty for the nectar of love
brewed in the cellars of pure affection

am i wrong if i show my parched tongue
in need of the honeyed word my ears heard once
and my eyes read many times addressed to me?
my heart knows no policies
no politics
a kind and mild heart
alive and wild heart
a pure and child heart

Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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for the dear girls & guys who call me didi! ! !

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  • Rookie - 84 Points Yash Shinde (5/1/2014 12:13:00 AM)

    A beautiful write didi.......
    An affectionate and humble write indeed.......
    A child heart, a mild heart, cute rhyming...
    Its always good to be a child at heart, give, crave for love in return (although not advisable) , forget the past, cherish the present and greet everyone with a smile........
    May this write of your fill joy in hearts forever! ....
    ~Y.S. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lasoaphia Quxazs (7/4/2013 9:39:00 AM)

    Remember always, follow your heart, what is in it, what is a wish, follow through, because there lies lessons for you, let them be good or bad, but just open for what is there. I went through many of these feelings and I know I sure got my lessons, why I bless everybody in my life because they made me what I am today. When you get it, the whole world will be your best friend. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,114 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (6/23/2013 8:17:00 AM)

    A kind of khidmat the best way to worship to please to provide happiness Glory to be Allah keep on carrying up to unending end (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,100 Points Ramesh Rai (6/21/2013 7:59:00 AM)

    nice one didi.affection of brother n sister is purely divine n can b compared with mother only. i too have posted one poem with the same title. affection n love for u didi. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 501 Points Tribhawan Kaul (6/20/2013 1:56:00 AM)

    So beautifully written. Living in present is the best policy without worrying what happened and what will happen. You do have a child's heart: alive, wild and pure. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 413 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/17/2013 2:43:00 AM)

    'a kind and mild, alive and wild, pure and child heart' that believes in love and preaches love, a nice write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,488 Points Wahab Abdul (6/16/2013 4:01:00 PM)

    in the last 3 lines if you omit heart heart heart,3 times, yet the meaning is clear and understood,2nd line is very weak..hower 2nd stanza is the heart of the poem and where from the poem stands out and out.....a lovely poem, have i gone very critical? yet i love this poem.....give you 10... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (6/16/2013 11:42:00 AM)

    the one who know
    the one who show
    the one whose soul
    the one who make us whole
    the one i wish to be
    the one is Shahzia didi..............


    thank you so much...i am speechless (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/16/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    And what for whom? who call u ma'm..hahah...lovely poem & nice dedication....am i wrong if i show my parched tongue..awesome line (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (6/16/2013 1:12:00 AM)

    this is one of the cutest poems i have ever read in my life! ! ! :) it's lovely and touches the heart. All these girls and guys are really blessed to have such a nice diddi ;)

    my heart knows no policies
    no politics
    a kind and mild heart
    alive and wild heart
    a pure and child heart

    Only a pure heart has all these qualities. Superb! ! ! u made my day. this work is commendable! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Indira Babbellapati (6/16/2013 1:07:00 AM)

    This z the kind of poetry I enjoy the most; no polemics, no scope for rejoinders, no need for a defense. Flowing straight from an untouched corner of the heart without any jerks from hard sounding vocab. Keep it up, lady! (Report) Reply

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