Didn't Give Me For Three Years - Poem by Liza Sud

Didn't Give Me For Three Years -



Didn't give me for three years -
I will turn the other three.
That will be the work of Jacob
for Rachel instead of Leah.

It's the best - to let it happen.
it is harder - to allow,
it is shining me with white light,
as the movement of my love.

Tuesday, March 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love and dreams,woman
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 15 March 2016

That story of the man wit two women in his life reminds me of Dostoyevsky's The Idiot. But it ends better. And a labor of love is the message you draw from it. Te first two lines of the second stanza ewate te hardsip of life, the suffering, but the last two are expressing JOY, FULFILLMENT. It is the WONDROUS MOMENT Pushkin put in a Love Poem. But your poem also has the Soul's Truth in it: the shining of white light.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2016

To labour! ! For Rachel instead of Leah. Thanks for sharing.

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