Diseased Love Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Diseased Love

Rating: 5.0


You sweetly utter my name
But you love another dame

Your love I know
Is only for a show

Your kisses on my lips
Excites hatred that sips

Your touch on my skin
Is like a penetrating pin

Your hugs on my hip
Is like anaconda's grip

You can not fool me now
I shall forget you somehow

This foolish love is a disease
That has to to be cured to cease

Is the only way this hurting pain
Can vanish with freedom to gain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 08 May 2008

a diseased love isn't any worth. let it go deceased! a simple but strong expressive poem, marvin...

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Aaron Tate 08 May 2008

Ah, luster.. Awesome write, provokitive.

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Subbaraman N V 06 May 2008

A beautiful expression of love of undependable person!

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Viola Grey 06 May 2008

'your touch on my skin is like a penetrating pin' love is so often akin to pain, I liked this alot.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 05 May 2008

Must forget her...Shes's not worth it.

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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