Divine Music Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Divine Music

Rating: 2.8


When their eyes are full of tears
they feel the ocean running down their cheeks
and when they smile, it's the sun rays
upon their lips lifting the corners to make a bow.

When they feel confused they see the moon with her mysteries
inside their minds, showing fullness and crescent times
filling them with all the rhymes of the philosophers
from ancient times so they remember truths discovered
in the dark.

When they lift their hands to write a book
they feel the trees on a paper blank
and their fingers the branches they once were
and now
they give life to the tree so it will remember them.

When they laugh the mountains top open their beauty
and it echos through them.

-Divine music

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 23 June 2012

When they lift their hands to write a book they feel the trees on a paper blank and their fingers the branches they once were and now they give life to the tree so it will remember them. When they laugh the mountains top open their beauty and it echos through them. I especially loved the imagination in these lines that stand on the brims of our open heart........the rhythm in divine music, this poem! !

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 27 June 2012

Super and supple in flow! I feel it!

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Captain Cur 26 June 2012

This one plays like music. Fabulous. I think I hear Pirate Girl whistling in the background, and she's not whistling at my shape.

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Shouvik Roy 24 June 2012

simply beautiful..loved every part of it...

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Valerie Dohren 24 June 2012

Lovely poem, great imagery and depth.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 June 2012

inside their minds, showing fullness and crescent times filling them with all the rhymes of the philosophers from ancient times so they remember truths discovered in the dark................................................................................................. lily rejoices spark of full moon on its lofty grace beams of white reflexes on skin of haste night seems to slowly redeem by milky way heart remembers the deer red yet resonating..............oh what a write by imagery and metaphors impulsing reader to go through again and again when so intoxicating!

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