Treasure Island

Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini

(08 December 1992 / KwaZulu Natal, Pinetown)

Don't mind I am going to be with you.


In that night I will walk with you to the light.
In that mountain I will climb with you to the plain.
In that journey I will travel with you to destine.
In that party I will dance with you through the end.
In that pain I will fill it with you till analgesia.
In this life I will live it with you till the end.

I've been sinking for someone like you,
Like you were bone for me, I was bone for you.
I was hungry you came and fill me up
I was sick but you came with the medicine
I wasn't completed but you came and complete me
I wasn't frying but you came and give me the wings
You turn on the lights in me, with your caring
You bring that hope to me when it disappeared.
You bring that smile to me when I am sad.
You find me when I am lost.

It like I was created through you and you were created through me
So I can't survive without you, you can't survive without me.
You the party of me, I am the party of you.
If you say it over, my life will be over
Even if I am drunk I will be sober.
Although I am young I will be older.
Just take care of yourself because you are my lover.
Don't mind I am going to be with you

Submitted: Monday, May 28, 2012

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  • Joseph Olasunkanmi (5/31/2012 2:24:00 PM)

    I'm sorry I'll be a little bit critical. i'll start by saying nice flow, rhythm, simple diction, but firstly, the title looks too loose and grammatical incompetence not minding the poetic license at hand. nevertheless, keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (5/30/2012 7:40:00 PM)

    Outburst of the heart! A very touching love's confession that is well penned and poignant! 10+++ You definitely got what it takes to make it to the top of the Poetry World one day: TALENT! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! (Report) Reply

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