Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini

Freshman - 526 Points (08 December 1992 / KwaZulu Natal, Pinetown)

Far Away From Me - Poem by Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini

How to say these words because
I don't know her personally
Does that count on the situation like this?
Questions inside me,
I am able to talk when I can't talk, got nothing to say
I am able to ask when there is no question,
I am hungry but I can't eat, here is the food.
Since, when I can't talk to myself alone?
That why it always bright even if it is night to me

She came in that night but, bright to me as sunshine.
She came as beautiful as she is,
but how to say this since I haven't seen her?
How to prove in myself that I really care about her
How can I say that to her when I am far away from her…
Can I explain my feelings to her about her?

Lots of questions and lots of answers needed,
but no one to ask
There is a lady up there who seems to won
Won a heart from me
She looking with those eyes of Africa,
she had an African smile.
So that what I like for Africa it holding
a deep humanity from inside out
I liked what I am talking about it real what
I mean is cool.
But what can be trusted to me since I am away
Since she is away, no way but away from me
Far away from the heart that care about her.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Poet's Notes about The Poem

someone away i realy love

Comments about Far Away From Me by Goodenough Sakhile Dlamini

  • Bronze Star - 2,362 Points Rajkamal P.j (9/15/2012 10:44:00 AM)

    good poem-emotional.keep it to of luck... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 115 Points Barzin (8/23/2012 2:52:00 PM)

    Nice emotions I like it, nice frame, nice words (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Hlukanisani Welcome Mngomezulu Nhlekabayeli (8/21/2012 2:32:00 AM)

    top class bhuti hop this will last for douts.engabe iyona yiphi the way focus.plz b careful of the usage of words and Spelling.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (6/1/2012 6:01:00 PM)

    It is very beautiful, your feelings and thoughts flow through you and you try to find all of the words so desperately that fill your heart sometimes words are not enough to truly express them but you have because you found love that flows through your veins and she is always with you through love that holds everything together in one. Beautiful just love. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,521 Points Unwritten Soul (5/28/2012 11:07:00 PM)

    It's like sneaking to read your diary, emotional feelings and story walking so harmony here, like it... but if you separate into parts maybe it ease us to capture you said..but for now it already good and nice.thanks for sharing_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, May 2, 2014

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