Doubts Poem by robin machorro

Doubts

Rating: 4.8


driving slow in the raining storm
your telling me how much it meant to you
yelling at me but what did i do?
you said i have to learn to put some more trust in you
and thats when you left me
time past, we learn that sometimes
love doesnt last
we both changed, because no one stays the same
you had fun while you were gone
meet beautiful girls, you couldnt ask for more
while i was lonely, empty, and heartless
but now time passed, your now sad
because everyone you liked left you
im finally happy, found someone who adores me
but you came crawling back
asking for my love, begging for one more kiss
saying how much you missed everything
about me
now your telling me you only left me
because you knew i doubted
but if you wanted the doubts to go away
then why did you leave on that day?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 13 August 2010

You have sincerely floored me with this one. Totally enjoyed. Keep writing. Deep strong emotions.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 August 2010

Doubts do cause break ups. Trust is the key to any relation. Keep writing to express yourself, it will clear some doubts. Best Wishes.

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