Down In Alloway / 20/04/2008 Author's Pick Poem by Mark Andrew Hogg

Down In Alloway / 20/04/2008 Author's Pick

Rating: 3.5


Tucking my arms around
My curled up legs
I sit by the edge of a copse.
On a hill overlooking
The shorefront
I can see for miles.
Orange light
From the streetlights
Drifts
Out to sea.
Shadows of friends I once knew
Dance across the town.
My eye follows the river
Until shadows blur;
Doonfoot, Alloway, Forehill.
Night grows close.
The peaks of Arran
Rise through the failing light
As urges come and go;
the water ebbs and flows,
like a distant voice
Calling out
From the streetlights
Down in Alloway.



20 04 08

This poem was gleaned from a short story I wrote not long before; which i have since posted under the same title.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivor Hogg 14 November 2008

Beautifully composed in poeticc prose my friend evoked some cherished memories from my younger days

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R H 21 April 2008

Mark, this is lovely - incredibly atmospheric - you blend both mindscape and landsacpe to create a real sense of place and mood. You take the reader with you as you eyes scan the horizon and reflect upon the 'shadows of friends' you once knew, a place that obviously holds a lot of memories. Will return to read the short story too.. justine.

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Mark Andrew Hogg

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Dumfries/Ayr/Stirling, Scotland
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