Down The Drain Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Down The Drain

Rating: 4.8


The factory loomed
at the top of the hill.
A pub sign reflected
in yesterdays puddle
when it started again

The next days morning
mixed the muddle
with the rains
darkening frown
on falling leaves
from a tree dripping wet
with the stain of the sky,
which proved messier yet
from chimney soot
in the root of the road
and underfoot.

A broken bottle,
nights empty threat,
soaked fag ends,
the torn slip of a bet,
a stench of beer
from an open door
of a toilet crawled,
where someone had pissed
on the concrete floor
and drawled
dribbled words
with the wetness andmess.

All that remained
was the aftermath,
a drenched, stale mourning,
and a big bass broom
to sweep the path
as the gurgling gutter
was muttering glass
and disappeared
down the drain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Halls 10 March 2013

Love this Sally and I echo the other comments as it is so powerful in words and meaning. I can picture this as I used to drink in a pub like the one mentioned! Brilliant.

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Sally P. P. 03 May 2020

I used to play darts and was familiar with those places. X

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Dave Walker 08 March 2013

A fantastic poem, great wording.

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Sally P P. 03 May 2020

Thanks for your sweet comment, Dave.

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Valerie Dohren 07 March 2013

Very descriptive Sally - well penned.

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Sally P. P. 03 May 2020

Glad you read it, Val. Thanks.

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Sally Plumb Plumb

Sally Plumb Plumb

Haverhill Suffolk England
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