Dream Poem by kafil uddin raihan.

Dream

Rating: 5.0


I dream to be a bird,
I dream to be blue sky,
I dream to be green field,
I dream to be flowing river,
I dream to be highest mountain,
I dream to be raindrops,
I dream to be red rose,
But i never dream to be a man,
Because he has nothing to be fascinated,
No emotion, no feelings, no heart,
He is like a stone, that hurts another.
He is like a storm, that destroy lives.
If god give me another chance,
I dream to be a poem rather than a depressed poet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 30 May 2009

We all have dreams in life.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

You have crafted the unseen dream with nice imageries. Very lovely poem,10+++

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I dream to be a poem rather than a depressed poet.....beautiful write. all can be tolerated but not a man worthless creature.... read mine' all dreams not come true... though on different line... well done

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Priyanka Bhowmick 12 June 2009

the best i loved in dis piece is the last line.. 'I dream to be a poem rather than a depressed poet' wonderful writing..

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Rachel Martin 02 July 2009

a man is not perfect. striving for it can seem impossible. when God made you, you always had the Spirit of a person. a bird, a blue sky, a green field. they can only express their 'emotions' in two colors. brown and green. while men, can express their emotions in not just colors, but words just like this poem! think about it...

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Eyan Desir 02 July 2009

Awww, nice write keep expressing your self

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Marieta Maglas 30 June 2009

nice visual metaphors of color: ''I dream to be blue sky, I dream to be green field, '' and nice descriptive poem of nature....10+

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Joseph Poewhit 22 June 2009

To be one's self and not deceive yourself.

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Brishti Mazumdar 12 June 2009

I dream to be a poem rather than a depressed poet. Oh! Oh! ..Last line is well expressed. But, dear........ Please don't think in that way.....Be optimistic........10 for the message...Brishti

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