Dreamland Poem by Brandon Hoeg

Dreamland

Rating: 4.0


DREAM LAND
im in a dream world where its dark and always night,
just a dirt road with nothing in sight.
nothing but sorrow, cries and screams,
i come here when im asleep but its not just a dream.
its where spirits stalk me and shadows mock me,
i feel nothing but evil, my memorys haunt me.
so as i am walking and i hear the lonely cries,
i catch something strange in the corner of my eye.
its a big black house that ive never seen before,
i take a deep breath as i start to approach the front door.
i walk in, its dark, cold, i can see my breath,
i cant see anything and it smells like death.
as im beginning to leave i stop, because i thought i heard a cry,
i reach for the door quickly but it locks me trapped inside.
im terrified now, i cant even stand up straight,
im not in my dream land this nightmare isnt fake.
i start to calm down when i notice the screaming is gone,
i turn around in shock as the lights turn on.
its nothing, im no longer dreaming, im in my bed,
am i safe now? was it all just in my head?
i start to feel dizzy as i notice my sheets are red,
the evil inside has killed me, good bye, im dead.
back to the dreamland

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebekah Strunk 27 April 2010

This is a really good poem. I liked it a lot.

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Hanna T 11 April 2010

wow its really amazing :)

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Josh Schultz 22 March 2010

I really wish I could right half as good as this, I mean I could really picture this in my mind. amazing

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Brandon Hoeg

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North Minneapolis
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