Dreams Poem by Tammie LilAimo

Dreams

Rating: 5.0


if you whish hard enough dreams will come true,
if you have hope in each day,
dreams will come true
if you believe,
dreams will come true
if you give someone your heart
will they come true as they brake it?
if you gicve some one your love
will dreams come true
as they waste it?
if you finally understand what dreams can do,
then you now dreams dont come true.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i had a dream but it didnt come true, i gave my heart for this dream buut it never hasppend so i've never belived since.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tammie Aimson 18 March 2013

There has always been pain in that last line. No matter how hard i try to stop my self i always end up dreaming.

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Alex Medina 12 June 2012

Dreaming and believing can only get you so far. Some dreams are all that they are: dreams. I know what you mean though. I can feel pain in the last line.

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Dave Walker 01 February 2012

A great poem, really liked it. A great write.

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