I dreamed of death today
it felt so real
I was trapped and could not feel
Then I awoke
and thanked god I could feel a cold
breeze on my beads of sweat
I said I aint ready for death just yet
Then I swear I heard a voice say...
We can wait
Good one my friend I liked it but wish that the death stays away from you about 100 years : -) Keep the good job up: -) _Blessings_
I really like this! It's scary the dreams we have sometimes, and that was a very wonderful way of writing it out. nice work!
Dreams play tricks, the darn things and often seem so real. make sure they wait, a good poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Superb! This one really hits at the heart. Very good.