Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,045 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

An Angel Cries - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Looking down on a world
of violence and spite
an angel cries

Cries for the children
in a nation of fears
Cries for the people
who should have been their savior

How can civilization
live like this
This was gods creation
not gods damnation

An angel cries

Comments about An Angel Cries by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 17,610 Points Daniel Brick (3/20/2015 1:50:00 PM)

    Angels make sudden and unexpected appearances in some of my poems. And I have encountered them in many other poems by poets at Poemhunter. And now yours, with the angel helpless to stop or reverse our human behavior but filled with grief for its cost to humanity. There's more than poignance here, there's an undercurrent of anger that we have allowed this to happen. But I don't want to surrender to that anger. Far better to write a poem like yours which shows the compassion of this pure being and by her/his/its example points toward a happier reality. That's what your angel, and my angel and all of our angels do - they point the way. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,489 Points Patricia Grantham (2/28/2015 1:51:00 PM)

    Beautifully written and very heartfelt. Angels do cry and feels
    our fears and concerns. I love this poem Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,808 Points Brian Stafford (2/12/2015 2:43:00 PM)

    very true, well said. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,112 Points Amitava Sur (8/29/2014 12:56:00 AM)

    Very well said Dave. This is the real crisis of today. Thanks for sharing.

    You may read my poem Humanity is at stake (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Robert Beck (12/19/2012 3:29:00 PM)

    Satan has his way, that's is the direction today. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Sharron Stephenson (6/15/2012 4:23:00 AM)

    this one to me seams to a message from the heart rated it 10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 609 Points Marites C. Cayetano (5/15/2012 11:17:00 PM)

    simple, but says so sad reality, nice poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 146 Points Jayachandran Chakrapany (3/23/2012 3:33:00 AM)

    simple in content but it say a lot.brilliant work.jk (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Justus inspire (2/3/2012 5:41:00 PM)

    great poem with deep meaning (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Dave Dafes (2/3/2012 12:01:00 PM)

    so touching, and very creatively written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Olujobi Jedidiahz (2/2/2012 2:56:00 PM)

    touching. this is a wonderful poem sir. keep up the good work. i love you (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,422 Points Ramesh Rai (1/31/2012 10:26:00 PM)

    The angel shall ever cry for the children in a nation of fear. xlent and outstanding poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sagar Shelar (1/31/2012 6:05:00 AM)

    So true & nice poem. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 46 Points Dickson Mseti (1/30/2012 5:01:00 AM)

    Angels always cries, human targets, winning spirits and the desire of being great have turned this world to be the word of pity, we feel sorry for ourselves sir. as I wrote Hear the children crying, the world should cry for itself (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jeline Loh Jen-Li (1/30/2012 2:12:00 AM)

    So true! Wow it is straightforward yet it is the fact (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Darkangel Flyfree (1/29/2012 11:28:00 PM)

    I love this its so true and sad that our world has come to this. I just love poems about angels. May I invite you to read some of my poems. Thanks! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karim Z (1/29/2012 2:01:00 PM)

    the poem ring so true. good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,211 Points Walterrean Salley (1/28/2012 6:30:00 PM)

    I very much believe that the angels, and even God Himself, are grieved for happenings of our world. Beautifully expressed. Thanks. Voted 10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,953 Points Smoky Hoss (1/28/2012 3:21:00 PM)

    Good words, with great meaning. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gayle Anne Goff (1/28/2012 11:33:00 AM)

    liked your poem have been off Ph for awhile but back on will read more of yours (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 23, 2012

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