George BernardBloodyShaw

Rookie (One day at the beginning of my life / England is my country)

*drowning In Love - Poem by George BernardBloodyShaw

Love is a whirl
a beautiful swirl
in which to drown,
an immersion,
t'would be the crown
with no diversion
to top a life
to have found
around
that friend and lover
to cover
all that would abound
let's drown together
as with a tether
just love and never
bother what's around....


Comments about *drowning In Love by George BernardBloodyShaw

  • Rookie Francesca Johnson (12/4/2012 1:21:00 PM)

    No need to drown, love. With the cut frozen over you'd just bounce off the ice.....
    Come on, GBBS, let's have some more of your poetry. It's been a long wait.
    Fran xxxx (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,734 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (7/17/2010 2:41:00 PM)

    You seem very happy and content.Lucky. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (7/16/2010 10:39:00 AM)

    Just hope the crew are still around to enjoy daylight and not blowing bubbles through a weighted sack...lol
    Happy days GBBS.
    Sid. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (7/16/2010 10:21:00 AM)

    Nice sentiments Mr GBBS.I know what you mean.
    Sid. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 15, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 15, 2010


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