Udaya R. Tennakoon


Each Other - Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

Laid things
Here and there
Unedited reality
Seems to be natural

Invitation
Broke the reality
And beauty of the disorder

Neatly and nicely arranged
Shingly and hardly cleaned
Structure less structure is structured
Everything calm and quite

Guests came with smiles
Gestures having edited
Both beginning to act
Prepared arena for that

Conversation
Plays with choked and forged words
Exaggeration
Jumps with high level tone
Competition
Goes flattering oneself
Conclusion
Ends with unaccepted misled signs

Created order with unmatched look
Uneasy tiredness was after that
Disorder slightly creeps from hidden
Naturalist living comes with shade in


Comments about Each Other by Udaya R. Tennakoon

  • Rookie - 57 Points Avik Datta Gupta (9/20/2012 4:26:00 PM)

    Well done..churn on... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 52 Points Erika Wingo (9/20/2012 10:08:00 AM)

    I truly understand what you are saying. Not only are your poems wonderful but one can lose themselves in the mystique. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alufa Joshua (9/14/2012 12:56:00 AM)

    nice write-up and keep it up. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, September 14, 2012


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