Udaya R. Tennakoon


Room In The Heart - Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

The apartment of the heart
A reserved room of vacant
Every day clean at night
Close the door and switch off light

Somebody wants to occupy
Allowed not me by locked key
Pain and hope of dreamy
One day light up coming with beauty

Descended moon though it disappear
Ascended life dreams in very clear
Gap of space is not so far near
Path through rainbow can visit here

Instant message or constant mail
Will give a surprise to cook tasty meal
Setting the table light up the candle
Finding the way and when rings the bell

Offer the key to open the room of my heart
Will see the picture hung on the wall of white
Touch up the untold secret poetic word
Open the window to come fresh wind


Comments about Room In The Heart by Udaya R. Tennakoon

  • Rookie - 192 Points Angel Lockwood (9/16/2012 6:14:00 PM)

    That's very pretty.
    So relateable
    Instant association with life
    Wonderful
    I smiled while reading (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/15/2012 4:12:00 PM)

    what i can say other than -C`est Maginique! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,870 Points Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (9/12/2012 3:30:00 PM)

    This is great, Odaya, with very rich images, constantly coming up, the key, the room in the heart, the window and the poem of beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 149 Points Vipins Puthooran (9/8/2012 2:03:00 PM)

    'tis a good poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,171 Points Buddy Bee Anthony (9/4/2012 10:29:00 PM)

    I Enjoy reading your work. It comes from the heart not the head. I will return to read more
    Peace,
    Buddy Bee Anthony (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Subrat Pradhan Love-immortal (9/3/2012 1:36:00 AM)

    well connected and images well written and used. try reading my love poems. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 2, 2012



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