Bhaswat Chakraborty


Earth - Poem by Bhaswat Chakraborty

Holding the seas, boasting the mountains
You invaded the sky with grace and glory
Tolerating the wild, keeping all terrains
Mother earth, what is your story?

The brutes, the beasts tear you apart
You smile and watch in quiet silence
They quarry, they blast your tender heart
Whence do you find (such) abiding patience?

You mentor the growth of all of life
Alike – gentle or rough, feral or tame
You nurture the seed, you foster the strife
You devour the dirty, you support the lame
You secure the weak – compassion’s allegory
Tell me mother Earth, what is your story?

Mother, do you cry for the modern man?
You precocious yet short sighted child
Developments of all sorts he would plan
At any obstacle, he is riled
Blind sighted, he’s ruined your balance
But he would deny that in legal parlance
His liberalism hides his greed so well
At any hint of guilt, he’d yell
Mother, you protect him too, and his factory
Tell us dear, tell us your story

Mother Earth, tell us your story
Of your love and of also your fury!


Comments about Earth by Bhaswat Chakraborty

  • Rookie Jen Capaldi (10/11/2009 5:46:00 PM)

    a very observant and cleverly written narrative poem about the conservation of the earth and the damage we do unwttingly to harm it every day. the personification of the earth potential thoughts and feeling used in this poem is fantastic. the drive behind the poem is very insightful. well versed and well written, my friend. absoutely a 10++++
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  • Rookie Rahul Sharma (9/27/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    YOU ARE A GOOD POET................ WITH GOOD IDEAS (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Ratnaprabha Raykar (9/23/2009 6:32:00 AM)

    this is an elegant piece on mother earth ur personification of mother earth makes it very hearttouching. i too have written a poem on mother earth, please read and comment it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rup Pokharel (9/21/2009 8:45:00 PM)

    Bhaswat
    If the Mother earth would hear the language we speak, see the activity on her lap
    i would tell her to sense the following lines first;

    Mother, do you cry for the modern man?
    You precocious yet short sighted child
    Developments of all sorts he would plan
    At any obstacle, he is riled

    Good art.10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (9/21/2009 2:35:00 AM)

    A great poem about our mother earth.
    Well said and a meaningful poem
    Enjoyed reading it
    10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (9/19/2009 7:04:00 AM)

    earth..oh earth
    your ground is rich
    fertlized and cultivated
    for our needs.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lynn Glover (9/18/2009 8:57:00 AM)

    A very fine poem about mother earth. I enjoyed the read. Lynn (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,945 Points Ken E Hall (9/18/2009 3:08:00 AM)

    The earth's autobiographry spelt out as it is the truth great poem
    realy telling man he better watch out++++10
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 968 Points C. P. Sharma (9/18/2009 2:02:00 AM)

    Great poetry. A genuine outcry of mother's soul.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherri Coulter (9/17/2009 11:15:00 PM)

    ...I shall say only...I love my boys MOTHER EARTH 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Aparna Sinha (9/17/2009 10:48:00 PM)

    oh..One of the best so far!
    points for beauty- 10/10
    points for wisdom- 10/10
    points for captivating text- 10/10

    A lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Opeyemi Borisade (9/16/2009 9:25:00 AM)

    Well written! Great rhyming pattern! Above all, concept, word coinage, progression... excellent. Thanks for the invitation Bhaswat. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noel Horlanda (9/16/2009 2:50:00 AM)

    This piece is well written. It comes out from the heart, love and dedication of mother earth is all there. This piece points out what man and beast have done to earth's environment and yet she (earth) remains quiet until her patience runs out and releases her fury and vengeance. A good one indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 260 Points Kesav Easwaran (9/16/2009 12:38:00 AM)

    Good work Bhaswat...very meaningful lines...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (9/15/2009 7:34:00 AM)

    This is excellent poetry and I love how you personify Mother Earth and ask her such pertinent questions. The last two lines give it a great unexpected bite of malice to add to the power of the poem. 10 love Karin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Matt Mooney (9/15/2009 6:01:00 AM)

    Brilliant exposé.It has to be said that man is his own worst enemy.He destroys his own future. You have only to think of nuclear power and it makes you think about the meaning of intelligence i.e intelligence used to self destroy.Climate change was never factored into massive industrial and technological development. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rahul Sharma (9/15/2009 4:46:00 AM)

    LOVELY POEM MAN! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Mcmanus (9/15/2009 4:31:00 AM)

    a very graphic poem about how man treats the land that has nutured and protected him, I give it a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (9/14/2009 10:33:00 AM)

    mother earth time n again does tell her storry...of her bliss as well fury. we r insensitive listeners, aren't we? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Philosophy of a DewyFlower (9/14/2009 9:16:00 AM)

    good theme/
    the EARTH is so wise as her CREATOR.
    the Mother EARTH endures forever the wild deeds of her cruel children. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 14, 2009



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