Your Song Poem by Bhaswat Chakraborty

Your Song

Rating: 5.0


I remember all about you
When I sing the song you wrote
The eyes get wet as they knew
The lifelong generosity you dote

Your words and your themes
Touch my heart as the morning sun
Melting into easy streams
The icebergs of my pain and burn

You appear in my reflection
You pervade my senses’ grip
You stay in utter perfection
On the altar of my worship

*******Translated from original Bengali*******

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 06 August 2009

Your words and your themes Touch my heart as the morning sun Melting into easy streams The icebergs of my pain and burn -------- lovely written poem, fine figurative language used here...well done!

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Eyan Desir 07 August 2009

Good write............

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Noel Horlanda 07 August 2009

A lovely love song dedicated to whoever she is. Beautiful lines and rhymes. Thanks

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Hiding Nothing 07 August 2009

Beautiful and completely heart-warming.

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Lynn Glover 08 August 2009

very nice poem, just keep on singing her song. Good rythem. Your Friend Lynn

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Nooruddeen Mm 03 November 2009

Lovely Rgds Nooruddeen

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Anu Joshy 12 September 2009

this poem reminds me of the lines..'when the hurt is full words are few'.....so much of emotions expressed in these few lines....if the translation is so beautiful the original must be awesome! ! !

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Peter Vector 07 September 2009

Yes, indeed a very pure and heart felt poem, about a compassionate love; I can only hope the narrators beloved knows his longing for her. I would believe it is inferred because she wrote the song for or about him yes?

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 03 September 2009

a heartfelt poem! well expressed!

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Lady Grace 03 September 2009

nicely written..good job..

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