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thisoul ofmine (5/21/2010 5:00:00 PM)
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Fire also provides warmth from the cold and light from the darkness. though i, myself perfer water ;) great write regarless.10
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The Dreamer (6/26/2009 4:46:00 PM)
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It burns in the stars
To make the universe possible
It burns in the stars
To have the heavens going
It burns the stars
really great well done
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surya . (6/4/2009 10:56:00 PM)
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beautifull thoughts.beautifull write.i love this para
'The ancient mother earth
Still cherishes the fire
In the hearth of her heart
To keep her progenies warm
And her oceans so fluid'
posted 10
love
surya
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Louis Rams (6/4/2009 8:04:00 PM)
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an excellent write, and the way that you express what you see
in your mind, is far beyond the time.
GR8T WRITE A TEN
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Rashid Iskandar (6/1/2009 11:18:00 PM)
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what a great poem.....
i gave you 10..
you can read mine too..
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Rory Hudson (6/1/2009 4:44:00 AM)
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A nice take on fire - dramatic imagery.
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