Show sign of repentance
Be aware of the fleet
Before a hard landing
Use your ejection seat!
(2008/5/30)
Authenthic sacrifices don't show your repentance but shows your redundance shouts and says Banzai! ! ! ! ! ! !
Very astute Persian, wouldn't it be useful to have an ejection seat when things got a bit awkward,10 for this, Lynda xx
Stunning as always Persian my friend, you really do have your very own edge, that's what makes you a cut above many a poet. best wishes *10*
An interesting poem, with a new kind of imagery here which leaves place to multiple interpretations, and still, which relates to much deep thoughts. 'Be aware of the fleet' seeming to me the most important point in this poem... Very well done! 10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Use your ejection seat in a flash, safety first; avoid this crash ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad