Shahzia Batool

Veteran Poet - 1,255 Points (Pakistan)

Ek Aarzoo! - Poem by Shahzia Batool

Dukhon ki chhaon mein
Taaron ko saibaan kr k
Gulon se rang chura k
Mein roshnai karun
Jo bus chalay
To tuloo-o-ghuroob ka manzar
Falak pe bikhri hui ek daastan ker dun
Hawa k dosh pe
Aanchal ko baadbaan ker k
Jo bus chalay
To mein baadal k naqsh-e-paa pe chalun...


Comments about Ek Aarzoo! by Shahzia Batool

  • Rookie - 152 Points Muhammad Ali (1/7/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    very poetic. i enjoyed. beautiful work dear. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Waseem A Malla (8/20/2013 10:07:00 AM)

    Ek Aarzoo.... A little wish wigreat repercussions :) nice one again (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 597 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/11/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    'I wandered lonely as a Cloud That floats on high o'er Vales and Hills, ...' a nice wish. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2013 9:25:00 PM)

    Dukhon ki chhaon mein
    Taaron ko saibaan kr k
    Gulon se rang chura k
    Mein roshnai karun........ shukriya.....10

    me dua karu
    tu sehatmand rahe
    teri har arzoo puri ho
    mukam hasil ho..... hasmukh (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sun Shine (7/31/2013 11:54:00 PM)

    Hawa k dosh pe
    Aanchal ko baadbaan ker k
    Jo bus chalay
    To mein baadal k naqsh-e-paa pe chalun... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,089 Points Ramesh Rai (7/31/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    to consolidate the fragmented story of sky.. beautiful write.love your write. bas iske aage bhi kuchh likhne ko dil karta hai. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,089 Points Ramesh Rai (7/31/2013 9:14:00 AM)

    to consolidate the fragmented story of sky.. beautiful write.love your write. bas iske aage bhi kuchh likhne ko dil karta hai. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,607 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/31/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    What you wish - beautifully put. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/31/2013 7:29:00 AM)

    Wow...Beautiful write Shahzia.....Loved it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 31, 2013


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