X - Ray Poem by Shahzia Batool

X - Ray

Rating: 4.7


Whatever on your page
whenever I just read
there surely find a sage
who has a moral creed

I decode your message
and leave there my note
comprising my homage
if you wish to connote

a good deed's to be praised
if someone reads you once
he simply stays amazed
at boldness and brilliance

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by, and based on Aswath Raman's Poem... X-Ray
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 20 June 2013

Great poem Shahzia, an excellent recommendation for both yourself and Aswath.

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Indira Babbellapati 20 June 2013

An x-ray vision Do the readers need To read what lies Between the lines But too much exposure To the x-rays is ridden With radiation!

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Wahab Abdul 21 June 2013

a nice tribute... to a poet friend.. cool

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Yasmin Khan 22 June 2013

'Creativity is really a marvel, when it descends upon us, we simply get amazed'...I rejoice in the happiness rendered by your great literary comments, dear Shahzia, ..a real Shah!

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Paul Brookes 22 June 2013

Inspiration comes sometimes from great insights like this poem Thanks for sharing =: OD BB

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Allemagne Roßmann 03 July 2013

Aankhen jab aatish Ghalib ya to phir Fidayin

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Walterrean Salley 30 June 2013

So lovely. I read it twice, and enjoyed each time. Very good.

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Heather Wilkins 29 June 2013

beautiful tribute to a writer.

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 27 June 2013

Lovely thought, lovely words, Shahzia, you are lovely.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 June 2013

Shazia, a wonderful inspirational poem and thanks to Aswath Raman too! Enjoyed!

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