Susan T. Aparejo

Rookie - 32 Points (Dec.09, / Gingoog City, Philippines)

Embracing The Wind - Poem by Susan T. Aparejo

Different work of world,
Telling me paradise,
When its totally rubbish,
Telling me heaven, \when its the hell.

Why people force to accept,
The irony of each reality,
When artificial is prioritized,
The original is fancied,
To shelter the genuine form of fantasy.

Look at carefully its hues,
Scrutinize the structures,
Seems its perfectly genuine,
When you sign the receipt,
May we're not embracing the wind.


Comments about Embracing The Wind by Susan T. Aparejo

  • Rookie ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (7/18/2009 5:47:00 AM)

    true words..very well said (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Rommel Mark Marchan (6/26/2009 3:33:00 AM)

    Why people force to accept,
    The irony of each reality,
    When artificial is prioritized,
    The original is fancied,
    To shelter the genuine form of fantasy.

    THIS IS AN INDISPENSABLE TRUTH
    living in this world a mask-wearing world (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (6/25/2009 10:46:00 AM)

    nice susan and i agree lovely poem 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 25, 2009



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