Empty Poem by James Fitzpatrick

Empty

Rating: 5.0


Nothing. Just a clear sky on a dulling day. A deserted street with waving flags on painted posts. The regimentation of complete uniformity. The lack of empathy in silent sorrow.

I march to where they are buried in a dark graveyard of black nodding heads, painted with wide staring eyes, and grimacing teeth. I have taken a backward step to move me forward on a sinking bog, squelching, climbing to who knows where.

I am lost in an abyss of advice as to what to do. I am without experience. My sage gone, sits on the shoulder of the unknowing and ill prepared, to guide the fool. They had reached the point of where they could go no further, so I must work back to meet them, or wait here for nothing to arrive.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beckett, on learning of the passing of Joyce, tries to deal with the loss of a friend and mentor, by focussing his creativeness on the minimalising of art….The rise of the far right in modern politics and the overbearing political control of modern society…. The creation of simplistic contemporary cultural fascism and it's denouncement of all art modern and post-modern for the purpose of financial gain. Paragraphical in Triplicism
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 06 January 2015

They had reached the point of where they could go no further, so I must work back to meet them, or wait here for nothing to arrive. A beautiful poem and a thoughtful note explaining the poem that helped in understanding it................10

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Lyn Paul 03 January 2015

Heartfelt words. Can only imagine the feeling, Thank You too for your notes.

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Hunadi Maleka 02 January 2015

Well written piece.

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