faith whispered
always remember
I will never forget you
always believe in you
take care
real life begins
as youth matures
leaves
embryo parent
world
marking thought
presence
in decision places
freedom whispered
make mistakes
now as youth learns
stretch out
imagination keys
open doors
fear not
learning demands
experiences
boldly embraced
to etch wisdom
into embryo souls
enlightenment dawns
Copyright © Terence George Craddock
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sweet simple twist of imagery, nice use of more open words that aim to your point well, good growth chart of youth to maturity, blissful ignorance to wise ways ending at enlightenment, one step at a time. I really really like it! Thank you