ramesh rai

Gold Star - 15,771 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Entreaty - Poem by ramesh rai

The extremists envisage for the purity
the purity is left behind
outpace the extremism
humanity commit suicide

Peace breaks into crumbs
the rampant advises for peace
the peace scambles in the race course
like a sick horse wheezing for peace

How the peace is to restore
when the earth has become a race course

Peace is searching for peace
lost in the bewildered world
or peace has fleed away
for fear of bewildered world

Let us pray the mighty world
to dwell in our lovely world


Comments about Entreaty by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 7,833 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/4/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    Earth has become a race course
    Peace is searching for peace
    Very powerful lines indeed. Hope humanity will learn something from your words. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/4/2013 10:44:00 AM)

    Powerful write Sir..Where is peace, especially humanity committed suicide and earth has become a race course.
    But still as you said, Let us pray the Almighty God to dwell in our world to make it lovely and peaceful.
    Great message, especially what is going on today....Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,771 Points Ramesh Rai (9/3/2013 8:30:00 PM)

    in the last line plz read mighty peace (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 4, 2013


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