Tides have rushed in and taken
the time that was given to us, it
marched in and captured the very
epitomy of our souls, and left us
each in a well filled without the
slightest hint of a light, but like
our love, it withstood the fate
of its endless journey
Time has passed and once in
awhile, still, looking into not
away from, and still can see
beyond the the depth of our
tender hearts
Love is, was, and always will
be the number one for both of
us, but not to be loved together,
we have searched our lives and
each has given the other the
respect that we each deserve
and have made that dying vow
that will take us to our eternal
resting rainbow........
My friend, this is absolutely beautiful... touched my heart! (he's your flame.. when you read my message, you should understand.)
time and tide won't wait...tides have rushed in...time given being taken out...or was it the other way round? beautiful poem, Bonnie...the sky the light the clouds and the rainbow...the life and inside the rainbow love...10
A wonderful title and the words are so moving. A lovely piece. Love, Andrew xx
i love the flow of your words.The last lines says it all. A nice and lovely write from your heart, Bonnie. Hugs, Meggie
'we have searched our lives and each has given the other the respect that we each deserve and have made that dying vow that will take us to our eternal resting rainbow' very true indeed...soo beautiful...'eternal resting rainbow'..full of colurs...wow..rainbow is suppose to be temporary, most times love ends in bitter sweet experience...so sweet..i wish i can find such 'eternal rainbow'...some say it s an illusion though..thanks ma'am..liked it very much 10+++ And thank you for your kind visit to my poems from the kingdom far far away regards shan
very inspiring and loveliest way to express our feeling to others! like Mendelssohn Lieder Ohne Worte on words.
Bonnie, I read he other day 'to find the pot of gold at the end of a rainbow, we first need to feel the rain'. Even though you are parted and missing each other could be the rain, you are sure to find your eternal rainbow. As always the imagery is stunning and will stay with me for a long long time... Karin Anderson
Truly a 'till death do us part' type of poem. You have such a way of giving hope with your poems. Something to aspire to. Thank you for sharing your talent.
A poignant poem about a pot of gold, perhaps? It is a rare soul that can leave a loving relationship without bitterness. I admire you - and remember, life has a way of providing us with new doors to open when others have sadly closed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
respect that we each deserve and have made that dying vow that will take us to our eternal resting rainbow........ ---------- Great poem, touching verses you have posted here...eternal rainbow of love and friendship.................10