Eternity's Home... Sonnet Poem by elysabeth faslund

Very poignant. You have achieved excellence in both form and content. Lovely work, Elysabeth. Warmest regards, Sandra

This is absolutely adorable, the subject matter makes it so much lighter but you've woven in some pretty meaty stuff here, making us realise just what life's about. Love it Elysabeth, going to add it to my favs.... HG: -) xx

Somehow the sonnet form seems perfect for this important reminder about the awful consequences of global warming and the responsibility we all share to cherish this wonderful planet and the sun that, because of our stupidity and misguided consumerism must ultimately destroy the next generation of children who play and sing in its warmth. A powerful piece, written with a poet's concern and wonder. love, Allie xxxx

Absolutely marvelous....and of course I love the way you've managed to get children in the mix.....Your mind runs so deep lizbeth...truly you are gifted..~~~marci. :) x~~~

Elysabeth, An interesting way to say conserve our lands for eternity for our generations to follow. Beautiful poem my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it. David