Evening rain decorated to the city,
the red umbrella became bright that girl,
rainy brushes caressed to streets...
The water colour landscape dreamt about winds.
Romantically … «with a spring» to leave it would not be desirable … 10//
Evening rain became glorious. Short but a cute composition. Added my 10.
Very good use of imagery here Tsira, great verse. Best wishes, Andrew
The girl with her bright red umbrella adds vividness to the evening rain. Your creative vision is 20/20. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. Wishing you and your talented pen only the best. Warm regards, Sandra
Beautiful painting with your verses, dear poet Tsira. I give a 9+ (correct some words, omit some needless) . I can dance in this evening rain. Thanks for sharing. Give us more of your rich talent. Joseph S. Josephides Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Int.Lib.Poetry awarded
the mystical words sizzle by the rain of evening with message of hope and desire let there be sun again.............wondrfully wrought by the imgery, evening rain when reminds the dances by the green,10+, thanks for sharing
haiku-like delicacy heightens an almost familiar but also hauntingly surreal painting... Rgds, Ivan Evening rain decorated the city, a bright red umbrella became that girl, rainy brushes caressed wet streets... The watercolour landscape dreamt about winds.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Last line comes with an artistic vibe to it