abhilash fraizer

Rookie (8-6-1975 / Cochin, Kerala)

Everlasting Things Are Incomplete! - Poem by abhilash fraizer

Dreams, fallen from the stars,
Glistened in your eyes, dear.
They spoke to my soul
Of an everlasting love,
You and I yearned for…
Your eyes once sheltered me,
Your eyelashes fanned my soul,
And taught me to dream
Stars and galaxies…
Holding your slender hand
I swam down the layers of love,
And sailed the oceans of love…
They were the days…
Dreams of fallen stars
Still open their eyes…
But in my memory!
Everlasting things
Are to be left incomplete!


Comments about Everlasting Things Are Incomplete! by abhilash fraizer

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (2/13/2010 9:58:00 PM)

    Dreams of fallen stars
    Still open their eyes…
    But in my memory!
    Everlasting things
    Are to be left incomplete!

    I hope someday the things get complete and be everlasting as your efforts.10/10 again. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 116 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (5/14/2009 3:07:00 AM)

    Very romantic.........good imagery. well written (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shaik Zakeer Hussain (5/5/2009 9:04:00 AM)

    aye well written. Got me back to my school days. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Joseph Poewhit (5/4/2009 10:49:00 AM)

    Poem holds much emotion under the surface (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/4/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    good write...the concluding line speaks volume of the emotions inside...inside mind...inside this write...
    good piecce, Abhilash...thanks...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 4, 2009



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