Everyone Knows I Love You Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Everyone Knows I Love You

Rating: 5.0


On a summer morning, we smile at sunrise,
Plan to walk through fields of marigolds;
You have long hair and a slender body,
You have a necklace of jade
That hangs low between your breasts,
I seek to delicately kiss your necklace
And rest with dreams in this sensual sanctuary
That promises love and acceptance.

I become speechless thinking about you,
The beautiful day, the warm breeze,
The green grass, the flower petals
That laugh as they fall into the lake;
One can hear birds and insects sing,
Everyone knows I love you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivy Christou 22 December 2005

sweet and gentle with beautiful images and such a romantic scenery! Excellent work my friend! HBH

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 22 December 2005

This is so gentle and beautiful Uriah. I loved it!

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Ebone' Ingram 19 August 2006

i'm earnestly waiting and thirsting for this feeling. good job, buddy eni da kid

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Amberlee Carter 31 December 2005

I know this all too well.

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Mary Nagy 27 December 2005

This is beautiful Uriah! Your heart seems to just exude love and romance.......what a wonderful poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Hugh Cobb 23 December 2005

Fine work, Mr. Hamilton. The simplicity of the lines evokes the essential complexity of emotion. The last line is a revelation and yet is inevitable.10 from me. Merry Christmas, Hugh

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Angela Wright 22 December 2005

oh, just wonderfully romantic! ! ! i absolutely LOVE IT. :)))

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