Evolution Poem by elysabeth faslund

Evolution

Rating: 5.0


A whale in the seas
Had boney maroney knees,
But he glided along
Hearing a morning song...

Coming from the beach
That he couldn't quite reach.
He tried a million years
Despite Cetacean jeers!

But his little, bitty son
Definitively won...
Flippered with alacrity...
Day after year with tenacity.

One dawn, a goodly thrust
Sent this younster, with crust!
Up on the beach...loud elation!
'Come on pop! You'll like
Being a
Crustacean!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 02 December 2007

Enjoyed this poem very much. Very easily read, sings along with a sense of humor. I can hear the ocean splashing (clapping) .

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Ivan Donn Carswell 26 November 2007

And thus came Dr Seuss! By keeping it whimsically simple you make it work... Rgds, Ivan

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Original Unknown Girl 26 November 2007

Love it Elysabeth! ! Being a crabby crustacean I can go with that.... Great work! HG: -) xx

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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