Jonathan ROBIN

Rookie - 116 Points (22 September / London)

Expelled From Eden


Shifting shadows shroud proud hopes once bright,
Expectations dampen, disconnect.
Sweet promise teeters, sudden circumspect.
Time's march mutes rhyme, climb turns descent, delight
Over as promise peters out despite
Love's theme which once seemed shared song strong, dream decked
Enchantingly with passions too perfect.
Magic unsustained, heart pained, from flight,
Yet still protesting, falls into dark night.
Vacant stare, anticipations wrecked,
On oaths unkept, rejection, broods. Respect
Is battered, sjattered joy leaves painful bite.
Confidence, contested, tasting tears,
Expelled from Eden, traces wasted years.

Submitted: Wednesday, September 18, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 20, 2013

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(10 August 2009)

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  • Gold Star - 33,905 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/18/2013 12:25:00 PM)

    As the title chosen Adam and eve both expelled with the attachment of satan and still this is going on on this earth thank u (Report) Reply

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