In the eye of the storm
where the rain clouds let up
past to my back
hope the future clears up
Praying for better days
keep it real in better ways
hope calm weather stays
Future in my eyes
a life when no one dies
and great mind collides
you got to love these time
where the grand ma and grand child sits
and everybody eats
as they reminisces
on the good old days
Although this piece needs some work, I think it is well written. You'll need to improve the grammar and capitalization, etc... but it can be quite great if promoted. Keep up the good work! If you can, i'm trying to promote and get my work out there and known. I'm about to release my latest conceptual novelty and all twelve pieces are here on this site. They each cover 12 different areas in society that have been infiltrated by the powers that be. A few of them are; The Equation, (Big Banking) Orwellian Youth, (The Family Unit) Justis, (Law) and Each and Every Day (Food) .
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is nothing short of extraordinary, bringing together the past, present and future, reminiscing on the past, taking the best out of the present and hoping for the brightest future. Well done.