failures? ? ?
who are they? ?
can i classify myself as one of them?
yes, i fail, i maybe fail million times,
and even more than a million in my lifetime..
But i disagree to be called as a failure..
I maybe failed, stumbled down but i never forget to get up again..
i never forget to fight,
i never lose the strenght and courage
and believe that one day i will reach my goal..
that one day all that mistakes will never done again..
i believe that mistakes can never be corrected
but we can learn to never done it again..
eveybody fails..
everybody stumble..
but not everybody knows how to stand again..
we can never be a failure..
unless we stop, stay down, and declared ourselves as a failure..
so rise up..
fight, stand, never forget to live..
never let yourself to be attached to that single failure..
never let that single failure ruin your life...
so stand up and say..
I'M NOT A FAILURE, I JUST FAILED NOW....
i will continue my life, because continuing my life after a failure is a big SUCCESS...and i know I will be successful sooner or later..
I know i deserve the success...
Ye i agree that it's a good optimistic poem! ! .. Contains strong messages too.thanks for sharing. I hope you take a look on my poems...10 Merna
faliure is in the mind, failure is a way to get better, fail a hundred times and you will be better in the end than the person who got it right the first time
Good concept with powerful intent. What started as a personal question turned into a universal appeal. Keep the faith, , , keep writing.
i love this poem it made me think about myself a lot thanks for writing this
Yes needs to be edited a bit, but the structure is nice! good poem.
Good poem needs to be edited badly. The form needs to be given strong structure and it is a bad grammar ridden thing full of typos and such. Though you are only 14 so you have time to work on it. I am 16 and still working on it.
Many times I have failed that it would take so many page to describe all of them in detail, however, I have learned my lessons the hard and painful ways, and I prevailed, great poem, my friend, keep it up, Love and Peace, Romeo
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very optimistic. True, lots of people do need some optimism. Good poem.