Abdul Wahab


>>Faith


On the bank of a thinking river
I stand with a fish line
To pluck out the unexplored ideas
But over the far end of the string
I feel a pull pushing me down

The spark of spirit is in abundance
And I roam on the top layers of thinking
But the net of faith I am entrapped
Drags the float of my guts.hindering my break out

Bifurcating the cloud of doubt
The light just pops out its head
But in between me and my inner self
I fear an eclipse casted by the planet of faith.



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Submitted: Monday, September 23, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 23, 2013

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  • Rookie - 831 Points Harindhar Reddy (9/25/2013 8:02:00 AM)

    This pretty impressive poem relied upon yr deep pondering soul. A craft narration of inner thoughts. Well writing so A+ (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (9/23/2013 2:09:00 PM)

    sometimes we are led by blind faith. Relying too much on others. Seek and you shall find. a good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,362 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/23/2013 12:32:00 PM)

    Eclipse caste on the earth by devils thought is completely red and red and nothing else what knowledge we vave so as to take out wisdom to find the truth nice poem10 (Report) Reply

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