Fall of snow,
Flakes gracefully landing pure and bold,
From heavy hung skies,
Silence is a tomb of lifeless lies,
She suffers in his arms of lead,
His old letters dissected when they are read,
Her mirror image reveal's a tired, pale, sunken face,
Crumbling into invisible pieces,
The pain will not cease,
She wishes for an end to her torture,
Striking at her inner core,
Ripping and tearing at her flesh,
Open wound's just too sore,
He chases long legged lust with so much more,
She smells defeat in his world of deceit,
Like the snow icy cold,
Slapping reality of glaring white being his force of might,
Falling snow gathering in the corners of her mind,
Switching off her inner light.
the pain will not cease she wishes for an end to her torture. like the snow icy cold switching off her inner light
agree with Unwritten.. the imagery so details to represent sadness and sorrow in this poem the emotion that you put in so alive love to read it
The inside, frozen with grief is powerfully presented and the melancholy tone is gripping! ! A moving write! !
Snowflakes fall down on Earth when winter comes. Open wound's just too sore ripping and tearing sound is produced. A great imagery is drawn in this excellently penned poem. Switching off her inner light, snow gathering creates memory and emotion in mind. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem.10
Wow....this is deep.....I think one could only write this from experience. You used the bleak imagery of snow very well to portray your feelings. Fine piece of writing Hazel......as always!
She suffers in his arms of lead. She smells defeat in his world of deceit very deep all through hazel
Such despair the whiteness of merciless snow. How I have known such as this You have gathered the skeins of despair and woven a triumph. Beautiful 10/10 BB
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It sounds darker than the fallen snow in my mind thought...the poem that depict the detail and imagery in very well idea...the coldness can feel here as if the snow is falling now! _Soul