Far Away Lands Poem by Melissa L. Pelletier

Far Away Lands

Rating: 5.0


Enlightened breezes cast hope
on far away lands,
spices and gin flavour the words
of the lithe.
Nothingness and fledglings love
the mist of the eve.
Molds and pots and far away things
plaster the walls of the inns.
Slices of existence cut through
the landscape that was once a town.
Buried in the soil, seeds laying dormant,
tell a story of old and far away winds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 04 January 2018

A profound poem. loved it.

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tom mc quade 11 December 2009

i find myself traveling in this poem as a happy stowaway in a voyage of words..i agree with patricia, this poem is a keeper!

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Patti Masterman 12 September 2009

Loved every line in this. It has such a rich feel to it, as though everything were part of every other thing..saved this for my favorites..thank you (smiles) Patti

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Louis Rams 20 April 2009

the spices of granada is plain to see for you have taken away the mystery.

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