Louis Cecile

Rookie - 2 Points (London)

Fast Women


Fast women

Your movement is untrue

Entice

Do represent all things nice

A female form shaped to perfection

Subconsciously and automatically

Your vision rules

Hypnotic

Tricking men as our thoughts turn quick to erotic

Romance has not a chance

We camber in packs to ask for a dance

Casting money for you be a wishing well

You know the game

You know we look

Manipulating our simple psyche does not let us of the hook

The chase continues into future times

Fast women move too quick for eyes to see

Blinded by what I believe you can offer me

Slowing down I visualize a glimmer of your distortion

Quite twisted

Though I still remain eternally addicted

Submitted: Saturday, February 06, 2010
Edited: Tuesday, July 26, 2011

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  • Freshman - 1,133 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/7/2013 6:12:00 AM)

    A very interesting poem. I always liked fast women but I was always too slow and much too po!
    The comments I must say add much to the poem also. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/18/2011 1:45:00 AM)

    Fast women with high heels make a lot of sounds.Thats the problem with their empty vessel.Sleep and slip always needs silence and reticence with her essence.Quintessential rhythms in your poetry.Well done.Reminds me of an experience in Richmond and Putney area two years back though you have the words of my mouth in a vehement manner with words in articulation.wow! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (7/24/2011 2:30:00 AM)

    I personally like my woman like molasses, these coffee women are too much for me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 86 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/30/2010 11:44:00 AM)

    ‘A female form shaped to perfection /Subconsciously and automatically’ ~ Indeed so but why, ‘Though I still remain eternally addicted’…but be it poetic please lol excellent style… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Louis
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    PS Handle with care or care to handle
    n (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 494 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (3/6/2010 1:59:00 AM)

    Good to read the male interpretation.Try my'Side Affect' (Report) Reply

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