Louis Cecile

Rookie - 5 Points (London)

Dream State - Poem by Louis Cecile

I live in a world of dreams

Unseen not been

My thoughts provide a place to hide unseen

From the world become I light

Remain in light the eagle takes flight

I am the world to increase my might

What is real, who can reveal

Confusion decrease my sight

Do I wake up each day or dream in dismay

Are real people walking my way

Totally lost the purpose is done

Life and my dreams are now one


Comments about Dream State by Louis Cecile

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/18/2011 1:40:00 AM)

    A state or gesture of dreams in motion...like a movie..well done (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 11 Points Dave Dafes (3/8/2011 5:13:00 AM)

    I love this poem about dreams... Life can't be separated from dream... nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,127 Points Kee Thampi (1/16/2010 2:51:00 AM)

    thanks
    is real, who can reveal

    Confusion decrease my sight

    Do I wake up each day or dream in dismay
    keep it promises
    keethampi (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 9, 2010



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