Louis Cecile

Rookie - 5 Points (London)

Death Touch - Poem by Louis Cecile

Embraced by death the world had fallen

Nothing around

Tears bringing thunder the ground

Pierced with precision by the samurai’s blade

Inscriptions appearing on an unknown grave

Temporal disfigurement relives moments that brings a wish

A second chance for negativity to be dismissed

Death has a power to bring life to the living dead

Rebirth from the pit dissolution

Arise now is not the time to die


Comments about Death Touch by Louis Cecile

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (8/1/2013 7:19:00 AM)

    The sun rises bringing life
    The darkness comes in a word death
    Two wheels of a bicycle turn in pairs
    playing the circle game (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (9/18/2011 1:39:00 AM)

    Very deep my friend..death is so obvious you proved it once again (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Andrew Nawroski Saintly Slumber (3/7/2010 3:21:00 PM)

    Great hidden messages and well written.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 7, 2010



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