Louis Cecile

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Acceptance - Poem by Louis Cecile

Infectious smile has infected tears
The laughter strikes with spears
I am not dear and they are not sincere
Feeling fear
I must perform
For when I stop the stage is gone


Comments about Acceptance by Louis Cecile

  • Leslie Philibert (3/16/2014 5:41:00 AM)

    Like this, with its clever internal rhyme in L3...good work. (Report) Reply

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  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (2/26/2014 8:51:00 AM)

    Imaginative imagery implodes in powerful poem. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Hardik Vaidya (3/16/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    Louis Ceclile this is an epic, very well felt at your end, the beauty of any poem is not in into construct, it lies in the poets intellectual grasp through his soul. Very well done. (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (6/4/2012 4:21:00 PM)

    Noble feelings very well expressed in this great poem-thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Siyabonga A Nxumalo (5/25/2012 12:36:00 AM)

    Awesome flow in this great poem and the rhyme is good too...

    Siya_! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rekha Mandagere (4/26/2012 3:10:00 AM)

    Excellent write. there is nice flow and rhythm here :) (Report) Reply

  • Arild Ertsland Arild Ertsland (3/16/2012 6:29:00 PM)

    Awesome rhyming a very smooth flow in your poem, Louis.Outstanding work! Arild (Report) Reply

  • Lawrence H Lawrence H (3/16/2012 4:31:00 PM)

    Louis, nice and very good rhyme poem. Is this a Haiku poem? (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai Ramesh Rai (2/13/2012 10:38:00 PM)

    xlent. i liked it.For when I stop the stage is gone (Report) Reply

  • Heyyou Boy (1/9/2012 6:49:00 PM)

    Short and to the point. I like these. Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran Vipins Puthooran (10/1/2011 3:59:00 AM)

    Magnificient poem...
    I like the rhyme in it....
    Well written...poignant write (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann Allemagne Roßmann (9/18/2011 1:32:00 AM)

    Truly said and very heartfelt expressions to endear the readers with impressionism.I liked it (Report) Reply

  • Swarnendu Biswas Swarnendu Biswas (8/10/2011 9:21:00 AM)

    nice expression, few words it contains but extensive sense it creates.nice work, keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle Romeo Della Valle (8/7/2011 12:58:00 PM)

    An impressive write freely expressing the true feelings of the soul through a few poignant words! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented works! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (9/22/2010 11:05:00 AM)

    ‘I must perform /For when I stop the stage is gone’ ~ Like mythological sphinx who rose from ashes and started flying …bytes of teaching in economy great write… thanks for sharing Hon'ble Poet Louis
    Regards
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (3/7/2010 8:11:00 AM)

    You have said so much in so few words. Sincere acceptance is food for the soul. Well done my friend. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 10, 2011


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